first time love

[furqan]

For the first time in my dismal life

I feel love flow in my heart

the same heart once thought cold and lifeless

fills with glorious joy and happiness

because of a woman

whose spirit is full of passion

her eyes that shine like sapphire stars

filled with warmth and beauty

a smile that brings happiness to my sad existence

I have never known love until now

because of the way she touched my heart

took hold of my depressed soul

and showed me the beauty of life's wonders

everything that I thought impossible

all seems to be within my grasp

I see everything in a new light

because of something I thought unworthy to feel

to feel love's tender kiss

and I bask in its beauty so

because of the feelings of a woman

whom I would love now and 'til

my heart beats its final note to life's great song....

[Portuguese Man-Of-War]

Dude, I found this same poem here:



http://www.netpoets.com/poems/love/1560001.htm



Unless you are the author of that one as well, you should give credit for others' works.

[Chotee]

Dear Man Off War - I don't think there is anything wrong in the poem being posted from any another site, he need not necessarily be the author.



Have you not seem the simple message of that website "Send some poems to a friend - the love thought that counts! ". They permitted his to do so, they said that the love thought that counts and not that the authors name that counts....



Though the authors name is not mentioned, the person who posted it does not mentioned his name either for anyone to feel so offended.



A humble request, don't be so hard on other ...



Enjoy your day !!!

[Mungalla Rama Krishna]

I gave love till now,

but I can't get it till now,

I am waiting for that,

You are so lucky,

[Chotee]

May be you gave it to the wrong person dude !!!