where i can submit my poems

[krishna]

i have written a couple of poems , i want to submit these to any publication or any magazine, could any one give pointers ?

[FT]

Publish them here, if they have any merit, people will critique accordingly, and then can think about publishing them for wider audience.



And as a poet, or an artist, you should be able to take criticism positively to improve your genre of art. Ofcourse, not all, you should be able to discern what is good and bad criticism.



Good luck.

[CTC]

You can pen poems and publish them in english magzines like Alive etc

[krishna]

ok,...do review, i open to all types of criticism..





something is missing,i dont know what it is,

something is lurking, i dont know where it is,



i am getting older,i am getting no better

i am becoming what i hated to be.

i am at the crossroads of my life,

no need for another knife.



i dont know whom to talk, no one is here.

left with memories,Life isn't the same anymore here.

All i want say i am not a ordinary guy,

i am not the one ,but just a wierd one



So much to live for , so much to die for.

lighting a cigarate, walking down the street

looking to stream my emotions,

not to stray out of intentions,



being ridiculed ,being besmirched

waiting for soul to get me drenched in hers,

comeon baby,take me to your doors

comeon baby,take me to your doors

comeon baby,take me to your doors





the time for patience is over,

the time has come to give up our vows

the time has come to shakle ur chains.

comeon baby,take me to your doors

comeon baby,take me to your doors



Krishna..

[indiabo]

Hi,

Krishna,



You got poem to be liked by James blunt. he is famous for suicidal songs.



I tried to sing (bathroom). It was gud gud..



like country singersss.hmmmm



Do you got any plans to get it into singing way...

[indiabo]

All i want say i am not a ordinary guy,
i am not the one ,but just a wierd one

this couplet can be used for repetetive .......singing along in a bit of harsg metal...





is anyone getting how I am trying to sing

[krishna]

yeah my boss makes write all these peoms.....

i haven't considered about singing.......

but i listen a lot of classic rock.



by da way james blunt writes romantic songs right?

lets see what the future holds for me..



Thanx for the comment man.

PS i am not a bathroom singer.

[FT]

sending an email with my critique.

[indiabo]

Waitin for your other one.................krishna

[krishna]

thanx, man

critique taken to heart and i will definately work upon , by the way that was one of first poems.... i know i have lot to improve.



i dont want to be song lyricist, but i would like to poet/singer like Jim morrisson.



PS : I will posting more poems in near future in this thread..looking for your sincere criticism

[indiabo]

hey



I would like to see FT 's critique.



wheres that



thats not fair

[krishna]

i dont know whether i have a right to tell what FT told(other wise he could have posted on the thread rather than mailing ), but i take this liberty,

he/she said what i should hear ,( i think i totally agree with him)



he/she said my peom was cliched.

[indiabo]

i c..........

[krishna]

Hello guys and gals...

here is my new poem ,

coudl anyone review it please.........





Waiting for my Angel



Days went by,Years went by

Searching for my angel,

i always feel that ur just nearby.

life is never the same

without you.



when would the days come

where we can walk hand in hand,

why dont you give me chance

atleast give me a glance.



what mistake have i made

for what i have to suffer,

waiting for u to have a dinner.

baby i all want is to talk to you.



you are more than heaven to me

i know, i am not rich guy,

but i have one promise to make

i will never make ur heart break,



baby ,come and light my soul,

devoid of u,the world seems so pale

i know you are the one for me,

not even god will make me

stop from loving you.



when you aren't here

before my eyes,

i always miss you,

you are my eternal bliss,



you drive me ecstatic,

you drive me crazy

with you arm of magic

you made my life colorful,

you made this world beautiful,





baby,All i want is to talk to you

baby,All i want is to see you



PS every comment will taken by Heart.

[jai]

Hardly any place to post poems (English) in India.

Create Bolgs may be an answer to the filthy situation.