Hello guys and gals...
here is my new poem ,
coudl anyone review it please.........
Waiting for my Angel
Days went by,Years went by
Searching for my angel,
i always feel that ur just nearby.
life is never the same
without you.
when would the days come
where we can walk hand in hand,
why dont you give me chance
atleast give me a glance.
what mistake have i made
for what i have to suffer,
waiting for u to have a dinner.
baby i all want is to talk to you.
you are more than heaven to me
i know, i am not rich guy,
but i have one promise to make
i will never make ur heart break,
baby ,come and light my soul,
devoid of u,the world seems so pale
i know you are the one for me,
not even god will make me
stop from loving you.
when you aren't here
before my eyes,
i always miss you,
you are my eternal bliss,
you drive me ecstatic,
you drive me crazy
with you arm of magic
you made my life colorful,
you made this world beautiful,
baby,All i want is to talk to you
baby,All i want is to see you
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